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The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
« on: April 09, 2008, 12:42:03 PM »
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2008, 06:16:43 PM »
Read the first few paragraphs, and it seems good, but a new version of Heboris with Netplay calls me.
I'll read the rest later and edit in my thoughts.
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
« Reply #2 on: April 12, 2008, 05:12:49 PM »
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
« Reply #3 on: April 12, 2008, 05:12:58 PM »
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2008, 07:24:24 AM »
After reading the first chapter, I swear to god this is just following some sort of hentai storyline but with furry characters  :X
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2008, 11:47:10 AM »
Well it isn't going to :X absolutely no sex.  NOW READ MORE!
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2008, 01:32:43 PM »
I have been and its not bad.
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
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Re: The Falling of Cayor; A story in progress by Tempest
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