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Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« on: April 24, 2008, 03:34:47 PM »
Comment thread for the review of Definitely, Maybe by Snoggums.

http://www.aurality.org/2008/07/definitely-maybe-definitely-good/
« Last Edit: July 18, 2008, 06:30:42 PM by Polarimetric »

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2008, 05:52:25 PM »
This article confused me quite spectacularly. From the title I thought it was about the debut Oasis album "Definitely Maybe" (which is fucking awesome btw), but was confused to why the comma was there.

Not actually heard of the film, probably because it won't be out here for a while, if at all. Nice review though, good to see you got House in there too :P

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2008, 05:56:15 PM »
Hardest thing to read in my life, will one of you get some paragraph separation in there? :x
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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2008, 07:00:46 PM »
Hardest thing to read in my life, will one of you get some paragraph separation in there? :x

...it's not my job to write your article for you. :x

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2008, 10:17:24 PM »
I think she just wants logical paragraph breaks. :x Anyway, review made me want to go see it, which means you've done it well! (you had me hooked at the first sentence :'))

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #5 on: April 25, 2008, 04:06:26 PM »
Okay who edits this stuff?

"But it also written in a way where you sympathized for the characters,"

... ;D

Seriously, Snoggums, not a bad review.  That said, I probably won't go see it, as it's just not my cuppa.

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #6 on: April 25, 2008, 06:54:19 PM »
Okay who edits this stuff?

"But it also written in a way where you sympathized for the characters,"

I edited this at 2 AM. Be thankful that I didn't like leave out entire sentences. >:(

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2008, 06:58:30 PM »
I edited this at 2 AM. Be thankful that I didn't like leave out entire sentences. >:(
If you're editing enough to be in danger of deleting sentences,
« Last Edit: April 25, 2008, 07:00:18 PM by Polarimetric »

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2008, 07:10:22 PM »
I lol'd. :')

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Re: Definitely, Maybe, Definitely Good - Comments
« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2008, 10:19:34 AM »
I edited this at 2 AM. Be thankful that I didn't like leave out entire sentences. >:(
That'll explain it.  I've tried writing articles around that time of night, and then gotten up the following morning, looked at it, said WTF was I thinking?, and then promptly deleted it.